Rhyme is always tricky. 'To' when it should be 'too'. It's should have an apostrophe if its(!) short for 'it is' but I'm beginning to not bother because no-one seems to notice/care (including me). The smilie 'claping' should be 'clapping'. 'There' and 'their' can be mixed up if you're not concentrating.
One good thing about music is that when it hits you, you feel no pain - Bob Marley
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