[X4StringDrive]

Warning: Rhyming dictionaries can be hazardous to your muse!


This worlds become so deplorable, despicable, corruptible
Each day it grows combustible, disposable, unsociable
It's almost indecipherable, horrible, unrealiable
I never thought it possible, conceivable, predictable
but yet it's so perceptible, inevitable, acceptable
Is it that we're so forcible, gullible, pliable
I wonder if it's feasible, fixable, desirable
If we are even salvagable, flexable, reversible
I hope we're truely sensible, responsible, honorable
I know we're justifiable, reasonable, liable
We just need to be more approachable, available, impeccable
Just remember Life is not refundable

[knight46]

Kenny and Chris, that was so cool. Really, really good job to you both.

[carol m]

Oh man, I spend a day doing more guitar practice and miss all the fun!

I immediately saw these as a rap lyric - and.....I would say you have done it more or less like a rap - at least my idea of what rap can be - beat/lyric/tight rhyming driven but can also have musical/melodic backing.

We have a rap/hip hop band here called The Herd who play a range of musical instruments on their tracks (including cello). Many of their lyrics are political, but I don't think rap has to be political - and it definitely doesn't have to have violence either in subject matter or delivery style - that is 'Gangter Rap' and is altogether a different beast.

A great outcome to some cool lyrics, well done both!

[X4StringDrive]

Thanks again everybody...
Carol this is as close to rap as I'll ever get, and it killed me to say that.. lol

Chris, don't let my feeble attempt stop you from doing your version, I look forward to hearing it!