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Old April 2nd, 2006
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my first song ever

it is not finished yet and there are flaws in it but this is the basic idea

Perfect

Move one inch,
look at your feet,
you make the same mistake,
your standing in dog shit,
but I look to you,
feel the way I always do,
and then you laugh ,
I know now its fine.

Where standing still,
time goes by,
were looking alright,
I stare into your eyes,
I hold your hand real tight,
your perfect,
more then fine,
let me kiss you tonight.

The next day was fine,
I lay besides you,
you were still a sleep,
so I wonder,
Do you feel the way I do?
I look at you,
you’re so perfect.
Then I think,
what was your name.

Where standing still,
time goes by,
were looking alright,
I stare into your eyes,
I hold your hand real tight,
your perfect,
more then fine,
let me kiss you tonight.

Still not knowing,
I get out of bed,
walk through her house,
looking at the wall,
then my heart begins to crumble.
She has a boyfriend.

notes on what i did wrong are welcome

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