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Old May 16th, 2008
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Aargh- Lyrics challenges.....

Had another tune hit me that I had to get a rough recording done on quick. I've got the first verse and the chorus for the song, and a good sense of where it needs to go, but the wordsmithing is not going too well. HELP!

Here's a link to the song:


Here's the lyrics so far- haven't had a chance to do a rough vocal take yet, but you can get the sense of rhythm pretty easily.


I always thought that our love was true,
You knew I'd bend over backwards for you.
Every obstacle we overcame
That's what I thought, but it was just a game

CHORUS:
But now I know you're the one to blame
(For the lies that you have spoken)
And now I'm set free from your claim


Any takers on adding to it is appreciated. Basically it's a song about getting your heart ripped out and then picking yourself up and moving on with life. I think all of us can relate at one level or another.


Chris

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