[cshude]

Thanks for the kind comments on the song- that was an EXTREMELY rough cut- didn't even set up mics for it and timing was off here and there.
I like the lyrics from both knight and xstring- they sort of go together, with knight's being an excellent base to build the chorus from and xstring's being good verses. Think it might be enough to work from and put together a rough verse to get cadence set to work from.