Carol, you spend so much time running down your ability, I don't think any of us could've expected this, you did a great job.
You are a very talented lyricist, the story is emotive, stark and real and your backing track is superb (cut and paste 'joints' aside) I loved the faint echo and like Starsailor I thought the pounding heartbeat was a terrific touch.
I'm not a fan of rap, that's just a personal thing but all the same I think you'd be a great singer... at least give it a go!
Great job, well done.
