[starsailor]

Hey Carol, that was honestly me just lower than I normally go, did it on the spur of the moment after I read you're post. Just made up the lyrics and recorded a seperate vocal track (little bit out of tune on the second verse)

I'll play around with your lyrics, they're cool, and see what it sounds like recorded.
Here's the beat track, if you need it longer no problem this just gives room to play around before mixing, you can loop the track and make it as long as you want, might put a guitar in. The beat track is Hip Hop with a bit of beatbox

Sorry I failed to rhyme
Please don't punish
Me for this crime
I promise I will rhyme
Next time I'm here

Best Wishes

Chris