[starsailor]

Hi Nutty, Nuts means mad over here as well as the other things so I got the drift of that line, it does make people think a bit though which isn't a bad thing. Whiter shade of pale makes no sense at all but it didn't stop it selling.

I have some suggestions, hope I'm going along the right lines and that you like them.

Thought this could follow the Squirrels line.

No need for madness in my life
A choice between Husband and Wife
Just want to find which way to go
When you decide please let me know

And I wondered if you'd be interested in having this as the chorus,
and having the one on the original post as Verse 1 instead?

I notice things I am aware
Please think of me I'm here to share
Don't confuse me or make me choose
There's one of me and two of you

Hope I'm on the same wavelength no worries if I've missed the point

Best Wishes

Chris