I think that it just doesn't make a good song. I'm not to bad a writing college english papers and maybe that is what I have done with "Her Heart". It really doesn't matter that much. It was just thoughts from the past getting put down on paper. I think that I will stick to college papers. Thank-you so much for the time that you invested in trying to help me make it a song. I do appreciate that. I'll leave the song writing to you guys. Thanks again
