[Buchanan]

I know this isn't very good, and i haven't quite finished putting music to it, but I haven't wrote anything in a few months. I just got bored and started writing what came to mind and came up with this...

Forgive Me

Verse1
Baby please forgive me,
I know that as of lately,
My love seems kinda Dainty,
And my eyes look on so faintly.
Bm D Am E
But we're losin what we had,
I bet your dad's really glad,
It's all my fault, I feel so bad,
But I'm thankful for what we Had!

Chorus
So baby please forgive me,
I hope someday that maybe,
You will be able to forgive me,
Then my heart, can be set free
(x2)

Verse2
Love is like a tickin time bomb,
But were we oh so wrong?
We both new the shot was long,
But for the ride we went along.
Bm D Am E
I love you, please don't hate me,
You really oughta thank me,
I see that you don't love me,
Now your heart, can be set free!

(Chorus) x2

Tag
Sometimes if you love someone, you have to let them go!

[Buchanan]

Starsailor- Thanks, I'll take a look

Knight46- Thanks, I kinda am myself

Nutty- Thank You, I kinda like poetry and have wrote a little of that, so that's why i wanted to try and write music. I enjoy it so I think it's worth my time

[Buchanan]

Ok. I've spent about an hour on this last rewrite. What does everyone think?


Forgive Me(Rewrite 3)

Intro
Bm D Am C G

Verse1
Bm....................D
Baby please forgive me,
Am................Em
I know that as of lately,
C................................D
My love seems kinda Dainty,
Am.................................Em
And my eyes look on so faintly.

Bm D Am Em

Bm....................D
And we're losin what we had,
Am....................Em
I bet your dad's really glad,
C........................D
It's all my fault, I feel so bad,
Am....................................Em.......... .Am
But I'm thankful foooorrr... what, we, Had!

Chorus
Bm....................Am
So baby please forgive me,
Em.....................C
I hope someday that maybe,
Am.............Em.................D
You will be able to forgive me,
Bm.............................Am...Em
Then my heart, can be set free

Bm....................Am
So baby please forgive me,
Em.........................C
I hope somewhere that maybe,
Am......................D
I won't hurt inside on the daily
Bm...........................Am...Em
Then my love, can be set free



Verse2
Bm..........................D
Love is like a tickin time bomb,
Am....................Em
But were either of us wronged?
C.......................D
We both new the way was wrong,
Am........................Em
But for the ride we went along.

Bm D Am Em (Music Stops)

I love you, please don't hate me,
You really oughta thank me,
I see that you can't still love me,
Now your soul can be, set free!

Bm D Am Em
(Chorus) x2

Tag
I'll always love you!