Chris ol chap let me just say this
your voice it sounds with some bliss
but alas you do hide it like I once did
need to lose some effects I not chide
your mixed in so deep with the rest
what the lyrics say I can't attest
the style of tunes they are quite cool
just use your vox more as a tool
not that I'm a pro that'd be a long shot
but as I do now just show what you got
"To play without passion is unexcusable" - Ludwig Van Beethoven
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