Hi Windsong, I think we should change it, that first line doesn't sit right, I think you mentioned this verse last week it is one of mine, you did have concerns about it, it's your call on the tempo, we need a tune sample now to move things along if if you're happy with the song, are you happy with the ending Windsong did that last night. The video shoot for a song like this would be cool, beautiful girls, Harleys, beer and music, the perfect recipe for a great day

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