Whoah
You actually made it an mpeg file? Well, as long as it works, huh? It still sounds pretty good to me, I'd like to hear more. Do you have a rough idea on what kind of chords etc. you plan to use yet? Keep going!
And by the way, Connor, as much as I appreciate your input, you might want to start a new thread of your own. Keeps this thread from snowing under and that will probably give you more useful replies as well