[starsailor]

Originally Posted by Aunt Doty

I think it sounds good.........but wonder if rose tinted glasses would sound better than eyes??????

Hey Aunt Doty hope you're well, I was going to use rose tinted glasses but just used the eyes for a bit of a twist and tied it in with realize, I think I just took the easy way out as I couldn't find a neat way to tie up glasses but I'm open to ideas

Originally Posted by doug russell

I' like it a lot starsailor. You have wrote a song about me. I reckon X4 is right though, try cutting the verse down.

Hi Doug, I'm glad you could relate to it but I hope you don't get too much hassle, I will try and cut it down a bit, I played one of my old tunes with it but it felt like it was never going to end if I was playing it live the only person left would be the cleaner, the audience would all be tucked up in bed

Originally Posted by windsong

Very nice lyrics, makes you feel you are in the song.


windsong

Thanks Windsong, that's what I try to achieve with some of my songs, so that's a nice compliment to get, appreciate that comment a lot

Originally Posted by carol m

Some very nice lines there ss. I like the first line a lot. Also
Driving the car in the rush hour
Going slowly round the bend

I thought you lived in secluded sunny Cornwall, in a quaint village, in a house with a walled rose-garden and a pond??

I do Carol, I haven't got that many Roses but I am in the middle of nowhere and I have the wall and the pond, the problems start when I go out, apart from the Mother in law who I have no control over