[starsailor]

Originally Posted by X4StringDrive

Paint the windows? do you mean after going out of business? if its a daily thing, I might have to come open a shade shop over there

I caught the jist of jennifer just didn't sit right in the verse with me is all...when you stop in the middle of a verse to try and understand the authors intension, it seems to throw off everything else.

It used to be really bad walking down the high street, those painted windows were quite depressing. doesn't happen so much now but they put huge orange posters up saying closing down sale which are worse than the painted window.

I totally agree about Jennifer she's a nice girl but she'll have to go I fell into the trap of taking it for granted that the reader knows what I'm saying, like you say if the reader or listener has to stop to figure out what the writer is saying the song is dead in the water so I'm sending her back to the sixties, I will miss her though, if the other line works I can use that or I can rewrite the whole verse what do you think Kenny