[starsailor]

Hey guys your writings very strong
Thanks for looking at my song
My ice song left me warm inside
But don't yet have a tune in mind
It really was so cool to find
That Eddiez joined in on our ride
The song about the University
Will spring to life we'll hear and see
Rich vocals, strong words, sweet melody

Please forgive me this one time
I wrote a verse with triple rhyme
I think I've caught that same disease
Of rhyming couplets when linguistic
Maybe an ode devoid of rhyme
Will halt my immersion, or restrict it
I shall return, but need some time