ok out of all you have submitted this is by far your best work...good story, descriptive and emotional...i can see a bob segar "turn the page" melody or a nice slow country ballad with this piece...its not as dark or as confusing as previous submisions...in short this one works and reveals your "true" talent... the others just seemed that you tried too hard to make them work in order to satisfy someone else...stay true to yourself with work like this...i give this one a serious thumbs up dude..
