Nice one Knight, I was waiting for the elves and fairies to appear{lol}.
I'm a little confused about the stillness becoming a deafening roar followed by the bullfrogs bellow breaking the silence...just doesn't sit well to my thinking unless I've misread your message. Also "citizens" is another itch to me, maybe dwellers to go with your final lines?
Nice as I said, gives a good visual!
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