[MidnightRider]

i understand what you guys are saying and i think that this is one of my weakest lyrics im going to edit it and ill post it when i finish. thanks again

edit. heres an edited version, more criticism is welcome to any of my pieces.

My final solution is to drift away,
You know you must run away.
Leave me locked in this twisted spire
One day I’ll find my peace of mind,
And hear that heavenly choir.

Hold true my dearest friend,
The worlds undone, the end has begun.
This universal mind will, again, be fine.

My dear friend, have no fear,
You will not face the spear.
Forget your truth and listen to me,
Life beyond this is no guarantee.

Hold true my dearest friend,
The worlds undone, the end has begun.
This universal mind will, again, be fine.

The time is at hand.
Fly without delay,
While the others decay.
I know it’s hard to understand.

Hold true my dearest friend,
The worlds undone, the end has begun.
This universal mind will, again, be fine.