[X4StringDrive]

Well, I'll say it again MidnightRider, you definitly have a unique style. But I'm having difficulties grasping the messages overall, from a poetic veiw they're very artistic, but commercially I don't know how they would stand. I'm still of the mind that these would work very well in a heavy metal "gamester" kinda way. No offence intended these are just my thoughts, but they seem too confusing or maybe I should say that at a tempo of any reasonable speed would make for a hard time to understand, maybe I'm just to old to get a hold of where your going with them.

This is what I'm left with, please, again don't take offence to this, I just couldn't explain my thoughts any better

I need to drift away,............................................. ....from what?
You’ve got to run away............................................wh o? why?
Leave me locked in this twisted spire,.................whats twisted?
One day I may hear the heavenly choir................dying from what?



Hold true my dearest friend,............................is this who you just told to run away?
The worlds undone, the end has begun.........based on what?
This universal mind will, again, be fine..........universal mind?

My friend, have no fear,..................................is this another friend or still your dearest?
You will not face the spear............................when the end comes they're gonna stay safe?
Forget your truth and listen to me,...............yes, run away?
For I alone am the holder of the key.............you just wanted to drift away but now your the savior?

I guess I just need more of a story or maybe to actually hear one of your tunes to see how it works. Don't get me wrong , I think you have talent, I'm just trying to figure out where I want to classify it under.