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Old February 12th, 2008
MidnightRider MidnightRider is offline
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Peaceful Apocalypse

Here is another song i wrote, any advice, criticism or general feedback is appreciated

I need to drift away,
You’ve got to run away.
Leave me locked in this twisted spire,
One day I may hear the heavenly choir.

Hold true my dearest friend,
The worlds undone, the end has begun.
This universal mind will, again, be fine.

My friend, have no fear,
You will not face the spear.
Forget your truth and listen to me,
For I alone am the holder of the key.

Hold true my dearest friend,
The worlds undone, the end has begun.
This universal mind will, again, be fine.

The time is now,
Fly without delay.
While the others decay,
From the void I’m not allowed.

Hold true my dearest friend,
The worlds undone, the end has begun.
This universal mind will, again, be fine.

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