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February 15th, 2008
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The Songs we used to play
Any suggestions, feedback, whatever is appreciated. Basically a 3-chord song but I haven't perfected my playing enough to record it yet. Maybe in a few weeks, pending changes that might come from your suggestions.
Thanks in advance
The Songs We Used To Play
Verse 1:
We started playing rock in ‘61
Played for more than 20 years, man we had some fun.
Guitar and bass and sax and drums, together all that time
The thought that it might end someday never crossed our minds.
Chorus:
And I still think about the songs we used to play
We played ‘em loud, we drew the crowds, we rocked the nights away.
To me those songs were special, ‘cause we played ‘em our own way
I still think about the songs we used to play.
Verse 2:
Working days and playing nights got harder every year
In ’86 we called it quits, we split up all the gear.
That final night up in the lights, we played our songs once more
Then said good-bye, tried not to cry, and slipped on out the door.
Chorus:
And I still think about the songs we used to play
We played ‘em loud, we drew the crowds, we rocked the nights away.
To me those songs were special, ‘cause we played ‘em our own way
I still think about the songs we used to play.
Verse 3:
I’d love to have the band do one more show
But Ronnie’s dead, Tom’s sick in bed, and Charlie’s mind got slow.
And I can’t play the drums the way I could
It sounds so bad, it’s really sad, I used to be so good.
Chorus:
And I still think about the songs we used to play
We played ‘em loud, we drew the crowds, we rocked the nights away.
To me those songs were special, ‘cause we played ‘em our own way
I still think about the songs we used to play.
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Yes, I still think about the songs we used to play
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February 28th, 2008
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Here’s the recording, using a mike we got with our computer, so I sound like a Rudy Vallee impersonator (Or maybe I really sound like that).
Thanks for all the comments and advice. Here are the version 1.2 lyrics and a sample of the chord progression.
Those Songs We Used To Play
By Johnny Doxx
We started playing rock in ‘61
Played for more than 20 years, man we had some fun.
Guitar and bass and sax and drums, together all that time
The thought that it might end someday never crossed our minds.
Oh those songs we used to play, too bad they’ve gone away
I can still remember those songs we used to play.
We played ‘em loud, we drew the crowds, we rocked the nights away
I can still remember those songs we used to play.
Working days and playing nights got harder every year
In ’86 we called it quits, we split up all the gear.
That final night up in the lights, we played our songs once more
Then said good-bye, tried not to cry, and slipped on out the door.
Oh those songs we used to play, too bad they’ve gone away
I can still remember those songs we used to play.
We played ‘em loud, we drew the crowds, we rocked the nights away
I can still remember those songs we used to play.
I’d love to have the band do one more show
But Ronnie’s dead, Tom’s sick in bed, Charlie’s mind got slow.
And I can’t play the drums the way I could
They sound so bad, it’s really sad, I used to be so good.
Oh those songs we used to play, too bad they’ve gone away
I can still remember those songs we used to play.
We played ‘em loud, we drew the crowds, we rocked the nights away
I can still remember those songs we used to play.
I'm having trouble pasting the chords directly above the lyrics, so here's what I tried to play:
Verses: C, F, G, F, C C, F, C, G, C
Chorus, C, C7, F, D, G, C, C7, F, G, C
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February 29th, 2008
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That was really good JD, nice vocals you got there 
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February 29th, 2008
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+1 To X4Strings comments , great vocals on this Johnnydox, 
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March 6th, 2008
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Thanks for the compliments guys
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March 9th, 2008
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Quote:
Originally Posted by johnnydoxx
Here’s the recording, using a mike we got with our computer, so I sound like a Rudy Vallee impersonator (Or maybe I really sound like that).
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Sounded like Roy Orbison to me  .
That was great! 
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March 10th, 2008
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Thanks Doug - glad you liked it.
Johnny
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March 25th, 2008
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Hi Johnny, I don't know how I missed this. It's great. Quite a voice you've got there. Great lyrics too. 
One good thing about music is that when it hits you, you feel no pain - Bob Marley
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March 25th, 2008
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Thanks Carol - glad you liked it.
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