I've been finishing this up over the past week. It's still raw as hell (mostly because my guitar playing skills aren't up to par as I'd like them to be), but figure this is good enough to get feedback on.
It's going a little bit too fast for my taste, and I'd like to slow it down a little bit. Tell me what you think!
Tentative lyrics for it here:
Horrible lyrics to be critiqued.
I guess I should add during 1:34 to 1:50 I wanna add a solo of sorts.
