Another original Gone "feedback please" (melow tune) - Page 2

raybaro · January 4th, 2008

Hello guys and gals,

We just finished doing another song called Gone. This song was inspired by all of our loved ones who have perished. I hope you guys enjoy it and any sort of feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thanks

Eddi

Gone246: listen online

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tomg123 · #16 February 11th, 2008

WOW ray, great job amazing vocals loved it!

D-Dawn · #17 February 11th, 2008

Great! You must have some recording set up..nice and clear! Sounds VERY professional! I'll give it

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cshude · #18 February 14th, 2008

Verrrrrry cool. Sweet playing throughout.
On my system, the vocals for the verses were very muddy and laid back too far in the mix. Nice vocals (except the "death metal scream" heading into the solo. That's been so overused now, everybody sounds the same.)

raybaro · #19 February 16th, 2008

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Originally Posted by D-Dawn

Great! You must have some recording set up..nice and clear! Sounds VERY professional! I'll give it

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Thank you, I actually have a very inexpensive set (low budget college student).

I am still learning and every time I record a song it sounds way better than the last one. I will be re-recording all my originals once I get somewhat good

raybaro · #20 February 16th, 2008

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Originally Posted by cshude

Verrrrrry cool. Sweet playing throughout.
On my system, the vocals for the verses were very muddy and laid back too far in the mix. Nice vocals (except the "death metal scream" heading into the solo. That's been so overused now, everybody sounds the same.)

Thank you, I did notice that. I want to redo the song again. As far as vocals, we try to do as many things as possible. We want to be able to have a big arsenal of styles.