[starsailor]

Thanks for having a look and listen guys, always appreciated.

allthumbs - I chose car crash because people find it hard to drive past one without sneaking a peak to see how bad it is and Reality Television is a bit the same way, I agree with the train wreck analogy though as there are a lot of casuaties from these shows.

Kenny - I just used the computer mic and the sound quality has improved a lot but the hiss is still the obstacle so I'm making progress I have the Live soundcard plugged in but I havent got a mixer, I do have a preamp but thought I needed another audio interface or can I connect to the soundcard.
Pleased you like the lyrics as well, I quite like this song so I'll try and improve it.

Youtoo, Thanks for having a look and listen I think I'm heading in the right direction, just need to fine tune a bit.

Knight. Thanks for the comments Knight and I'm glad you liked it, I just picked up the guitar and went for it so I was surprised I got to the end with so few errors, how are you getting on with your songs, they were great lyrics

All the Best

Chris