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Old November 29th, 2007
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Hi tender crisp, I added a line to the chorus, no worries if you don't like it

Verse 1:

Seems to me you are not real
Seems to me you cannot feel
If I bleed, will you bleed back?
If I die will your heart lack?

Chorus:

Please just go, I'm not looking back
My life is more than flesh and blood
And you don't seem to understand
That I feel pain, like any Man

Verse 2:

I gave and gave you all my heart
I prayed for you while in the dark
Seems to me you need to see
Seems to me you need to reach

Chorus:

Please just go, I'm not looking back
My life is more than flesh and blood
And you don't seem to understand
That I feel pain, like any Man

(Bridge?)

Verse 3:

Why did you find ways to die
Without a chance to see you cry?
Seems to me you wouldn't dare
Aren't you in this life to care?

Chorus:

Please just go, I'm not looking back
My life is more than flesh and blood
And you don't seem to understand
That I feel pain, like any Man




Cheers

Chris


You don't stop laughing when you grow old; you grow old when you stop laughing.

Last edited by starsailor : November 29th, 2007 at 06:31 PM.
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