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Originally Posted by X4StringDrive
I know all too well where your coming from Chris, happens to me all the time as well. Glad your going to see where you can take it, looking forward to it.
Heres a quick verse, don't know what you think, if it fits or not...you decide and as always you have total control with this to do as you see fit. Have fun...............Kenny
Joyous cheer around the world
festive feelings are so grand
imagine all of mankind
living in peace in christmas land
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Originally Posted by X4StringDrive
Second thoughts....
Chorus, 4th line, maybe...is "a" wish to you from me...sound better?
and the last verse I just posted...unsure...Living "at" or "with" peace in christmas land? to avoid the double use of "in".
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What about?
Joyous cheer around the world
festive feeling are so grand
I see an image of all mankind
Singing carols hand in hand
The chorus change works ok, just wondered if you like this suggestion
You don't stop laughing when you grow old; you grow old when you stop laughing.