I think your muse took you in the right direction Kenny, the chorus is quite cheerful so I think you could have 3 so another verse would be cool but a break will work as well as it's only a small break nothing fancy, I read this when I got out of bed this morning and nailed it straight away, I think I should have recorded it then, things don't get complicated until I start thinking also I didn't know if you had a tune in mind, I'll do a sample of the tune for you today (I promise) to see if you like it
All the Best
Chris
PS. Thanks for the compliment, a songs only as good as the Lyrics so thanks for writing them.
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