My ears would like to hear a rhythm track, although another guit, or bass, or even lyrics might put it all together. I might also cut out one or more effect. Maybe if they were blended it would sound like an experimental art piece. At the moment, other than the interesting 'insane guitar', the other parts sounded a bit like they were just effects changes just for that purpose. The tempo seems to keep it from being a true mood piece. That's why a drum track sounds like a good idea to me... just my two bits worth. To me the guitar playing holds promise but the piece sounds like segments patched together.
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