Peptic
You got too much going on here , I heard 3 different tones which all could be used as a rhythm track . And I do believe there is way too much distortion ...
Distortion can be a good thing with what you are trying to achieve here but sometimes less is better . There major issues with some kind of feed back on this .
I listen to everyones music through a surround sound system and honestly there is way too much distortion . Play it with no distortion then slowly add little by little ...
I am not a prude who only listens to one style of music but there is a difference between music and noise and I am sorry to say all I heard was noise with promise of being music if I could have only heard it through all the distortion ..
Sorry to sound harsh but I believe in giving honest feed back to everyone ,
Trev..
