Hi Les,
I like the editing you did with your lyrics. I didn't think it was bad before, though. In fact, I could hear a melody and rhythm forming in my head as I read thru the lyrics. They're right to the point and melifluous. They talk to me! Your lyrics are very good!
I hear a country song in my head. I don't know if that's what you had in mind.
I also try to write stuff, usually not as well as I'd like to. When you're done I'd be real interested in how your finished product compares with what I'm hearing.
Regards,
Frank
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