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Old October 31st, 2007
tomg123 tomg123 is offline
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Originally Posted by cshude View Post
Well done, Tom! Very cool groove- a couple suggestions, if I may:
1) the transition from the chorus back to the verse is somewhat jarring, rhythm-wise. I think it's just a matter of stretching the chorus out one more beat
2) I think some harmony in the chorus would be great.

I think this may be your best work yet- you've come a long way in the past year! Keep it up!
You picked up on that cshude, good ear! so i confess, sometimes if
i plan on a recurring rythem track, instead of playing it 10 times
how many times it repeated) i play it once and use the repeat
option. I looked for the best possible end and start here. Its only
some originals i do this, and never covers...and thanks

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