I really like the rhythm of the words and the feel of the song. Maybe I'm old school, but I would rework the rhyming so that it is cleaner - they don't have to be perfect rhymes but it shouldn;t leave you out hanging either. Wild and night are too far apart for me. And I couldn't find any rhyming scheme in your chorus.
But, don't get me wrong, I really think there's potential in the words - got a great feel to it. Your use of repetition works well.
As for the chords, I like Marty's suggestion of the Cmaj7 and Fmaj7 but I don't know about the A and E major chords - they're out of key I think. Perhaps Am and Em would fit better. and make Trevor happy too

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"we don't see things as they are, we see things as we are" - Anais Nin