It sounds good, as for critique I have a comment that might just be stylistic meaning preference. I think the 1's weren't strong enough. I got the impression you wanted to have a sort've following sound rather than AM-zing GR-ace, sort've thing. But as for my opinion I would try out making the 1's a little strong but still maintain the nice flowing feel you have.
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