[__tsidewinder__]

"I still need to let it breathe more"

I'm not one to talk, but I can agree with that.

I really liked the part around 1:40. A great little melody there.

"towards the end I tried playing w/o the backing but it didn't work out"

I disagree, I liked the change. Like the Change itself, the fact that it was something different, and the actual lead. Hmm. I'll try to be clearer. I liked the parts before it, but the fact that you changed the BT a bit there added interest, and the quality of the improf stayed the same. Well, thats my amateur opinion anyway.

At 0.22 something really good was going on for a few seconds, it really caught my ear, it was syncopation or something, I don't know but it sounded really good.

Also the little line at 1:14 I really liked as well. It right away made me think of someone saying something, and so I think thats a really good thing, its something I try to do but can't. It was like you said something with the guitar at 1:14, and then sort of explained further at 1:17. Love it.

I have one critique which isn't so positive, but I won't tell you unless you want to hear it. This is because I'm really not that good at improf (yet), and I'd sort of be a hypocrite for saying it.

Anyhow, good work overall, keep going.