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Old March 8th, 2006
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  BME of the Song

Thanks, I believe the beginning would be from: "She was young and pretty." The middle would be: "Then one day he got sick." The end would begin with: "Day blended into night." Does that sound right? So now if that's right we need a hook. I do like, "Her heart is like an ocean. Will it work at all? Thanks again for the input.

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