I'd say ya nailed the vocal melody Nocat, I can hear what you're describing as shallow. I'm gonna somewhat agree with Allthumbs, I think those bending notes should get a little more attention or "emphasis"given to them...lay in 'em a bit more, they seem to come and go kinda quick, draw 'em out some to get the emotion across,(make 'em cry) give EC a quick listen. And it did feel a tad up-tempo. Amazing recording skills I must say, (I'm new to this whole recording thing,, still trying to get familiar with Audacity ) Just gave it another listen, I'm wondering... maybe if ya could mix in a bass to bring the bottom end up a little, I hear what your saying, not shallow...maybe tinny....to much high end,,,needs some bottom end. No means trying to come off negative man, just throwin' my 2 cents in.
That's just my personal opinion... nailed it otherwise bro!!!!
Garry
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