[starsailor]

Originally Posted by agent0064life

What I ended up doing was switching the third and fourth lines. I like the A, A, A, B rhyme pattern for the intro.

Nice one Agent006 that works really well feels a lot more comfortable, the lyrics are good for this song, thought I'd better mention the chasing the prize line, want to give you input, have you got any chord ideas in mind, do you play mainly electric, I only play acoustic at the moment use mostly the steel string but I do have an electro - Acoustic and a classical guitar also, I put a tune together for this but it might be a bit too mainstream for you, if you give me some idea of what kind of mood you want to set, I could work along those lines or if you've got some chords in mind I can have a go at them, over to you again

Cheers

Chris