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Originally Posted by X4StringDrive

Hi 006...don't know where your trying to go with this musically, then again I don't know where I'm trying to go either{lol}..anyways heres how I see it developing in my head ...Nice start by the way

The purpose
the meaning
why is it
lifes so deceiving

Time doesn't wait
while we waste away
chasing the prize
day after day

They make you believe
the words they do bend
but the prize is the chase
the chase to the end


Just my thoughts using your train of thought{so to speak}, still needs a chorus and to use the rest of your lyrics, but I thought I would throw it up in here and see what you think.

I thought I'd wade in with X4String and have a go at this 006, I'v had a bit of trouble deciphering your train of thought but X4String has unjumbled things a bit, all your ideas have just landed on the page in a constant stream of thought which is pretty cool but it's now a process of constucting it, so here's my attempt, don't worry if you don't like it, it's more an attempt to help you find a direction for the song, hope it helps in some way.

I've taken the last verse on Kenny's post and used it as the chorus, if that's ok, I've also rearranged the words and added a couple but the majority of the words are still there as they belong to you.





The Prize

V1

Life's so deceiving
The purpose the meaning
Always chasing the prize
What they made us believe in

V2

The prize is the chase
A chase to the end
No time doesn't wait
While we waste away
Chasing the prize
The purpose the meaning

CHORUS

They make you believe
The words they do bend
But the prize is the chase
The chase to the end

V3

We're programmed to love
To love and to hate
Is that our destiny
Our only true fate

V4

Will the chase ever end
No it never does
But we don't give up
Keep proddin' and pokin'
With our useless attempts
We keep tryin' and hopin'

CHORUS TO END

They make you believe
The words they do bend
But the prize is the chase
The chase to the end

The prize is the chase
The chase to the end