[agent0064life]

Need help finishing this song and I ran out of ideas so now I'm putting this in the collab forum to make something out of this... well anyways here's the original post:

Been in sort of a numb mood for the past few months and I think this sort of reflects that... Song lyrics aren't quite finished yet but I have the chorus/ending done. Just to let you know how it sounds in my head I hear sort of a 30 seconds to mars-attack sort of tune. Of course that will change about 10 times because I'll go read the lyrics tomorrow and forget how they sounded in my head but anyways here it is. I haven't really identified the chorus from the end but this is the end of the song... and the chorus is in there somewhere.

The Purpose
The meaning
Life's so deceiving
Chasing the prize
What they made you believe
but the prize is the chase
The chase to the end
Time doesn't wait
While we waste away-
Chasing the prize
but the prize is the chase-
The purpose
The meaning
Life's so deceiving
It is


I'm kind of stuck in a rut as to verses and such but I'm sure it'll come along as it always does... I'll update you when I come up with more stuff...constructive criticism and opinons/help appreciated.

Thanks

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And now I've added, after when todays the day:

Go out standing
so get off your knees
Programmed to love
to love and to hate
Is that our destiny
our true fate


also I've added, after

the chase to the end
time doesn't wait
while we waste away and

this:

Wait for the chase to end
but it never does
so you don't give up
Kept, proddin - pokin away
Kept tryin
With your useless attemps
But you never forget
when it ends this way----

(go into chorus whatever the heck it may turn out to be)