I agree with Jomi, very nice for 6 months. Nice tune, well balanced and clear recording. If I could make one suggestion:
I know when we first start we want to get as many notes into the mix as possible. I think that your expression is good and the structure is good, I think that sometimes you are trying to get in to much and that it throws of your rhythm a little. The silence in between the notes is as important as the notes is a popular quote.
But really nice overall.
