Well I think it sounds more in tune this time. So this is an original with a generic backing track? I'd like to hear it again with the new mic as this one still seems harsh.
You're using this mic with your new mixer right? Do you have a 3 band eq on the mic input of the mixer? If so you might want to play with that some.
Best I can tell it seems like you've got the right key!
Oh yeah... the lead lines sound good.