Interesting... Like the Chorus.. sort of fits better..
Its not how you act,
Its how you feel,
Deceit is a lie,
Love and Compassion are real
Is what i had originally before i change it...
the only bit i'm not sure about.. cos i think it breaks the flow.. is ..
Its not what you say
Its all in what you do,
The other 2 verses have a punchy second line where this one dosnt fith the same pattern.. but hey.. i'm easy with whatevers in your head...
Nice One.
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