I don't know if we should change lyrics. I think that this song is a bit sad for the nice happy major chords on the rhythm track. Also, I have some slight changes I would make, if these lyrics were of my own creation, but I haven't written many lyrics really. So, if you want to see my critique, let me know.
If you want to make some more lyrics, maybe on something history related, that'd be good. Then we could pick and choose which we like best.
Maybe I'll get some lyrics written, dunno. I think I can get some guitar work done, but I don't know how really. I have tons of ideas I've got stored on my hard drive, but none of them involve a capo, or the chords you played on the rhythm track. So, a bit stuck. Should I post some ideas I have?
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-John Lennon
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