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Looking back on this lyric I'm not real sure where my head was. I think the original intent was a story of one who is both dealing with infatuation and infidelity at the same time. I think the base idea is still good and I believe the hook "Jesus in Jade" is still a killer hook. It was just used wrongly.
Frankly, now as I look back, the lyric is all over the place. I remember playing it in a very Dylanish mode. Two chords I believe. Very boring.
There are a bunch of inconsistent images, as has been pointed out. The story really doesn't flow well at all. I'm sure the same story could be told in 3 verses a bridge and a chorus. But I was certainly indulging myself at the time.
The Jesus In Jade hook had nothing to do with JC, rather, one of those jade carved buddhist you could purchase at souvenir shops.
Which was and still is perfectly clear in my head. But obviously I did not get that across.
Thanks guys for having a go at it.
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