Hi Jomi, I listened to your song today and really enjoyed it. The type of lyric I like is one which gives an image- the sparkling glass, for instance. It's juxtapostion with what I imagine the area in which you found the woman was like gives it a special power. The fact that it's repeated only lends it more power. I agree with one of the other members that there's a bit of Dougie McLean in the guitar phrasing.
Nice work.
Bolerama
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