[Lcjones]

That was absolutely beautiful.

The lyrical content was topical and the guitar playing very polished. You have a natural singing voice which projects and your enunciation is great. And don't even worry about any accent.

I heard Dougie McLean all over this and if I didn't know better would swear it was he himself singing and playing. And that is a compliment and thats how your melody came to me.

Based on what I've heard here you should spend every waking moment devoted to writing and creating melodies. You're a natural!

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LC