Hi
Nice writting , one little thing I can't seem to not to mention and I hope you don't mind ..
For those times that you may stumble
And those times that you may fall
In the first line if you take out the word may as it is repeated in the second line I feel brings those 2 lines closer and deeper { in my opinion }
For those times that you stumble
And those times that you may fall
with the rest of the chorus added Becomes
For those times that you stumble
And those times that you may fall
I can promise you one thing
I'll be there to pick you up
Just my opinion like I said , but the rest is really good IMO
Cheers
Trev..
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