That was great Fong. That's a very difficult piece. Too bad you finished early as I was enjoying listening to it and looking forward to the repeated first section.
The only advice I can offer is to be careful to let the melody in the first few bars flow. At first I thought it started off a little mechanical (nerves?) but then it began to flow just fine right up to the end of the recording (not the end of the piece, as you short-changed us

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Well done!
