Well you make a good point about being a poem or a song ..
Whats the difference ? Well to me and I aint no poet or song writter , to me it reads more like a song .
I was singing this as a slow acustic ballard .In my husky out of tune voice
Some of the lines I must confide
Buried secrets I can't hide
These pages are a part of me
Deep inside my heart sets free
This is how I sang that verse , it just seemed to flow from the mouth a little better , thats' just my opinion ..
I hope this has been helpful , and the only way to improve song writting is to write they say ...
Cheers
Trev..
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